2013年6月12日星期三

Light

You won't be able to catch it
It will disappear before you can touch
But you will still want to check what is left
It is just a gust of wind

You won't be able to see it 
It enjoys to play hide and seek
Once you think you have caught a glimpse
It is just a shadow of the moonlight

You won't be able to recall it
It will be taken away by a messenger called time
Once the time past
It will leave you a mind full of confusion

It is the simplest word to utter
It is the sweetest piece to taste
It is the hardest treasure to keep
It is the sharpest sound to hear






Analysis
The word "it" in this poem implies love. Therefore, the poem is about how dynamic and untraceable love could be. There are four quatrains in this poem. Each of them is categorizing the characteristics  of love. This poem features personification in that love itself can not disappear or enjoys playing hide and seek; it is the people who fall in love do so. By using the personification, the writer is able to give the object or feeling-love human qualities. Also, in the line"It is just a gust of wind", it features the usage of metaphor. 

The Beauty

Oh, the Beauty!
How graceful can you be!
Walking at such a peaceful pace
As if nothing can ever be hurry

Oh, the Beauty!
How distant can you be!
Giving the Earth an indifferent glimpse
As if nothing can ever persuade you to stay

Oh, the Beauty!
How attractive can you be!
Swinging across the space freely
As if nothing can ever hinder you

Oh, the Beauty!
How freezing can you be!
Talking with needles in your words
As if nothing can ever prove you wrong

Oh, the Beauty!
How lonely can you be!
Staying alone in the palace above the clouds
As if nothing can ever drag you to fall

Oh, the Beauty!
How real can you be!
Or shall I say-
How illusory can you be!








Analysis
The Beauty in this poem is referring to the people who are indifferent and ignorant to the mundane
world. This poem expresses the writers points of view toward this group of people, maybe including herself. However, not all of the remarks made are positive. There are six quatrains in this poem. One of the important features in this poem would be allusion in "Staying alone in the palace above the clouds". The palace here is referring to heaven or heaven like space. It is suggesting people who does not show much engagement in the society, are expected to be found in their own imaginary world where they will feel loneliness.

Dine under the Pine

Pure Pair of Pearl
Dazzling light shine
With a Sweet and Slight Swirl
Dancing under the Pine

Birds twisted the line
Singing Sad Songs Sore
Under the Pine, the Lady Dine
Biting her heart and swallowing the dark yore







Analysis
The poem is forming a image of a lady dining under a pine tree. From the last paragraph, it can be inferred that the lady is recalling her sad memories from the past. The poem has two quatrains. This poem features several literary devices, such as alliteration at the very beginning of the poem "Pure Pair of Pearl". The usage emphasizes the decorations that the lady wear, which could possibly reveal more of her character. The poem also features the usage of imagery, especially in the second stanza where it becomes clear that the image is connected to the topic. This poem also rhymes in ABAB BCBC. Symbolism is also presented in this poem in the line"Biting her heart and swallowing the dark yore". This line symbolized the lady's sad memories. In the line"Birds twisted the line", the repetition "i" is a usage of assonance.

Lock of my shadow

No matter where you go,
my shadow will follow you
No matter what you do,
my shadow still covers you

Sitting on the piano bench,
you wonder why am I smiling
Cutting the tree branch,
you wonder why am I giggling

Day by day, you let the music daze
One by one, you polish the wood shine
Bouncing between the keys-black and white-like a maze
Your eyes are dark as wine

You are someone closer than a friend,
you are someone further than a friend













Analysis
The poem is written for a friend of the writer. Both of the structure and the rhyme pattern follow the rule of English sonnet. There is an example of simile in the line"Your eyes are dark as wine". The simile used here presents a clear image of how the friend's eyes are like in the writer's mind.






The Lemon

At the bottom of my bag
lies a twinkling tiny lemon
Fresh and pure it paints the air
I lay my hand on the rough little piece
It is giggling with a muted sound
Sliced open with a knife
the lemon cried- cha-cha
Leaving tears in the plate
reminding me of a old bitter-sweet taste


Analysis
The poem is about a type of fruit and its taste, colour, size and sound. There are 9 line in this poem. The poem features the literary device- personification. For example, in the line"Fresh and pure it paints the air".

Sonnet 18

By William Shakespeare



Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? 
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date: 
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimm'd; 
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest;
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou growest: 
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this and this gives life to thee.











Analysis
This poem is about the comparison between the  lover to the summer's day. The poem follows the format of English Sonnet. The writer passionately expresses his love by using examples of hyperboles, such as, in lines "But thy eternal summer shall not fade" and "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this and this gives life to thee".

In the Silence of the Morning


By Peter Duggan

In the silence of the morning
When air is soft, and still
There’s a kind of mystic feeling
Oh, the way it makes me feel!
I just want to be in silence
So I sit and close my eyes
And look into my ‘me’ ness
And let it make me wise.

It doesn’t matter what the weather
How the moon it be, outside
If it’s raining, if it’s snowing
I open my heart wide
Which leads me to the looking
That I’m always going to do
That has taken my persona
And created me brand new.

In the silence of the morning
My eyes all closed to light
I let the light come into me
And I feel it, though so slight
The tiny mystic whisper
That is ‘me’ and always will be
In the silence of the morning
I am looking straight at ‘me’.

Analysis
The poem is about the writer's meditation in morning. This poem is an example of a ballad. One of the examples of literary device used inthis poem would be symbolism in line "I am looking straight at 'me'". The 'me' here is representing the writer's inner self which is different from the general term 'me'.