2013年6月12日星期三

Lock of my shadow

No matter where you go,
my shadow will follow you
No matter what you do,
my shadow still covers you

Sitting on the piano bench,
you wonder why am I smiling
Cutting the tree branch,
you wonder why am I giggling

Day by day, you let the music daze
One by one, you polish the wood shine
Bouncing between the keys-black and white-like a maze
Your eyes are dark as wine

You are someone closer than a friend,
you are someone further than a friend













Analysis
The poem is written for a friend of the writer. Both of the structure and the rhyme pattern follow the rule of English sonnet. There is an example of simile in the line"Your eyes are dark as wine". The simile used here presents a clear image of how the friend's eyes are like in the writer's mind.






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